English Essay
Through Drafts 1.1 and 1.3 I made many revisions, especially in my analysis. In my first draft of the analysis, I failed to expand sufficiently on the responses to the questions pertaining to the Draft 1.1. However, in the next draft I dramatically revised the analysis resulting in more of an understanding of my writing. In Draft 1.1 I concentrated too much on the negative description, rather than equally representing the contrasting interpretations.